Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things

IELTS Writing Task 2 & Answer

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #2010
Question:
Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. What is your opinion?
Answer 1
There is an argument that exploring space is a waste of money and that there are more urgent needs to be addressed on earth, such as reducing poverty and preventing...
By Jade Lee, 2017-10-15  View full answer
Total words: 281
Band: 7
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try Introduction as start point.
  • Suggest to use some rare or uncommon words to show your vocabulary range and level. Introduction seems too plain, try to update it.
Answer 2
Space research costs much of money, like many other researches. Some people agree that space programs deserves money spent on it, whereas others think that it would be more...
By Nguyen Haai, 2018-02-12  View full answer
Total words: 305
Band: NA
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Conclusion as start point.