Increasing the petrol price is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems

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Increasing the petrol price is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer 1
Modern technology and civilization change the world positively but also bring disadvantages, like traffic congestion and environmental pollution...

The proponents of this view claim that recent studies have shown that the use of this energy has dramatically decreased due to an increase in the price of petrol...

Alternatively, there are other possible solutions to address this issue. First and foremost, governments should pay special attention to renewable energy, such as water, wind, solar energy, etc...

In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, increasing the price of petrol can be a practical factor to reduce consumption of this energy, at least in my country...
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Answer 2
Traffic and vehicle pollution have undoubtedly become considerable problems in cities and motorways everywhere...

While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the leading causes of the increase in traffic and pollution, higher fuel costs are unlikely to limit the number of drivers for long...

I think to tackle the problem of pollution, cleaner fuels need to be developed. The technology is already available to produce electric cars that would be quieter and cleaner...

However, changing the type of private vehicle people can use will not solve traffic congestion. To do this, we must improve the choice of public transport services available to travelers...

In conclusion, I think that long-term traffic and pollution reductions would depend on educating the public to use public transport more and on governments using public money to construct and run efficient systems...
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