Too much emphasis is placed on testing these days

IELTS Writing Task 2 & Answer

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #2015
Question:
Too much emphasis is placed on testing these days. The need to prepare for tests and examinations restrict teachers and exerts unnecessary pressure on young learners. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer 1
How to evaluate a student's skill or quality isn't a straight job. People in different countries have separate ways to approach the issues. However, in some countries,...
By Nellylo Vekelly, 2017-10-28  View full answer
Total words: 302
Band: NA
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 1 as start point.
Answer 2
For many people interested in studying abroad, one of the first problems they face is obtaining a visa to enter the country and, in many situations, the procedure is time...
By Jiabao Lam, 2017-10-16  View full answer
Total words: 265
Band: NA
  • The introduction seems long, refine sentences.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 1 as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Conclusion seems too plain, try to polish it.