Modern appliances have become more common in the home, leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle

IELTS Writing Task 2 & Answer

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #2016
Question:
Modern appliances have become more common in the home, leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle. Do you agree or disagree?
Answer 1
Innovations of science and technology is changing our lives. Washing machine, refrigerator, microwave oven, more and more enter our homes and cause everyday life different from...
By John Imont, 2017-10-28  View full answer
Total words: 320
Band: NA
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Conclusion as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.
  • Suggest to refine coherence and cohesion by removing wordy linking words.
Answer 2
The impact of innovations and inventions in our daily lives has increased dramatically. Most homes these days have, at the very least, a washing machine and a microwave, yet...
By Jiabao Lam, 2017-10-16  View full answer
Total words: 281
Band: NA
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has THAT(8) ARE(7) AND(6); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Conclusion as start point.