Problems with environmental pollution have become so severe that many countries are trying to solve these problems

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Problems with environmental pollution have become so severe that many countries are trying to solve these problems. Suggest possible solutions and give your own opinion.
Answer 1
Environmental pollution has become one of the most controversial issues in the world, especially in developed countries...

On the one hand, everyone bears a great duty to protect our environment. To begin with, parents at home and teachers at school should teach the next generation how to cause less harm to our environment and take care of Mother Earth...

On the other hand, governments should make more efforts to reduce pollution. Firstly, making public transport more convenient to encourage more people to use it will save more money and energy...

To conclude, there are many ways to address the issue of environmental pollution, and both individuals and government have their own responsibility for this...
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All Words26914553%
Top 300 Words139 (51%)57 (39%)41%
300 - 1000 Words57 (21%)38 (26%)66%
Over 1000 Words73 (27%)50 (34%)68%
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Link Words: 17 (including link phrase: 0)
Sentences: Number: 14; Average Length: 119 characters; Words/Sentence: 19
IELTS Essay Format:
-The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
-You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has and(12), more(6), people(5), environment(5), can(4), pollution(3), are(3); try to decrease duplicated words.
-High-ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing; suggest rephrasing some.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
Answer 2
Environmental pollution has become a severe problem all over the world. However, we do not usually try to improve our environment...

People should use eco-friendly products such as natural detergents or manure rather than chemical ones...

We should use public transportation rather than our own vehicles to reduce air pollution. For instance, public transit can save us money and energy...

The government must invest more to improve our environment, such as building more purifier factories and developing alternative energy resources...

In conclusion, improving the environment requires a great deal of effort. We must be concerned about these environmental problems and make considerable efforts to prevent pollution...
Band: 6.5
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