Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS Writing Task 2 & Answer

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #2052
Question:
Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer Hints:
The reasonable option is to disagree with the statement. The reverse view is difficult to support.

Reasons not to ban
  • Ads have a history as long as markets; no one can ban them entirely.
  • Ads are the primary information flow for sellers to introduce goods.
  • Buyers also understand production and service by ads and decide purchase.
  • Ads may cost society resources and mislead consumers, but it helps increase the transparency of the market.
Benefit from a complete ban of ads
  • May decrease goods' cost and price.
  • Buyers won't be misled by fake information.
Answer 1
Concerns about the prevalence of advertisements and their effects have reached a fever pitch nowadays. While there exists an initiative that the government should impose a...
By Dang Tran Tung, 2017-10-17  View full answer
Total words: 335
Band: 8
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
Answer 2
There are many ways today to stand out products and services, since through digital devices to banners on streets and roads. Some people say that prohibiting advertisements as a whole would be beneficial to our society. I'm afraid I have to disagree with that vision, and the reasons follow below.
First of all, most ...
By advertisement, 2020-07-15  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 290
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
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Answer 3
Some people argue the government should not allow any commercial product promotional activities on all the media forms ranging from print to online. In my opinion, while there are some obvious down-sides with ways institutes advertise their product and services, overall, it is more beneficial to the consumers. The ...
By Ranveer, 2020-09-14  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 358
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a clear position is presented throughout the response.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-The organization is logical, and there is a clear central topic to each paragraph. You may consider to re-write the second paragraph as two paragraphs.
Lexical Resources:
-The range of vocabulary is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision, and it shows an awareness of styles and collocation.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-Grammar and punctuation are well controlled.
Answer 4
There is no doubt that nowadays, advertisements play an indispensable role in boosting the sales of products. However, in the present scenario, it is commonly said that society would benefit if all types of advertisements are prohibited. This essay will strongly disagree with the notion and uphold the belief that ...
By Gurvinder kaur, 2020-09-28  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 321
Band: 6
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a position is presented that is directly relevant to the prompt.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-There is a clear overall progression in the response, but somewhat mechanically, with occasional errors
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Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice and spelling.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There are attempts to produce complex structures, but these usually contain errors.
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Answer 5
Some people claim that a complete restriction on all types of advertisement could better for our society. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this idea, and in this essay, I will discuss why commercial promotions are inevitable in the world economy.
First of all, we live in an information era, and the cutting ...
By munir, 2021-05-27  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 257
Band: 6
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-The main ideas are relevant, but some are insufficiently developed.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-The organization is logical, and there is a clear central topic to each paragraph.
Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though the essay didn't use less common vocabulary with accuracy.
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Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and although errors occur, they rarely reduce communication.
Answer 6
Some people insist that advertising is considered completely useless, and believe that imposing a ban on it definitely brings about benefits. While I acknowledge the downsides...
By RoadTrue Zuan, 2017-10-23  View full answer
Total words: 296
Band: NA
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 2 as start point.