The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problems is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs and countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
This is an "agree or disagree" question. To encourage people to live in the city, not in the suburbs or the countryside, is relatively easy to write. You should focus on the traffic, and "the best way" hints to compare two cases, it is difficult to score 7 points without comparison.
- Many places can walk to.
- Save traffic time, especially for small and middle cities.
- Promote investment in public transportation.
- People can go to work by bus and subway.
- Help the economy of urban and rural areas.
- People go to work only on necessary.
- Solve the traffic congestion of big cities.
Some people think the heavy traffic and transportation can be eradicated if people settle down in cities from countryside areas. However, I believe it will multiply the issue rather than resolve it. Urbanization brings a lot more traffic problems to cities because of the increase in the urban population ...
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Band: 6.5The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.Task Response:
-The main ideas are relevant, but some are insufficiently developed. The essay structure should be refined, you can present your point by comparing two methods.Coherence and Cohesion:
-There is a clear overall progression in the response, but somewhat mechanically, with occasional errors
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-The range of vocabulary is quite wide and shows awareness of collocation.Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and although errors occur, they rarely reduce communication.
In the era of development, a group of people proposes that people from the rural area to cities to migrate in cities is the best method to resolve the traffic and transportation woes. In my opinion, this is not an effective way to accommodate these issues, and I will demonstrate many other alternative solutions in this ...
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Band: 6The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Response and logic are good, but you need more or better points to support your view.
Individuals are encouraged to move from rural areas to city centers in order to solve traffic conjunction. In my opinion, I disagree entirely with this statement because it will occur overpopulation in downtown and inconvenience of public transport.
On the one hand, encouraging people to live in the cities have a ...
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Band: 5.5The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.Task Response:
-The main ideas are extended and supported; the response is ok.Coherence and Cohesion:
-The organization is evident and cohesive devices are used, though rather mechanically.
- Help LinkLexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is limited, but just about adequate for the task, try to enhance IELTS vocabulary.
- Help LinkGrammar Range and Accuracy:
-Punctuation is sometimes faulty.
-Some grammatical errors, such as article (a, an, the).
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