It will be better for society and individuals if driverless cars are widely used. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

IELTS Writing Task 2 & Answer

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #7047
Question:
It will be better for society and individuals if driverless cars are widely used. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Answer Hints:
Agree or disagree question. Think about the impact of driverless cars and give reasons to support your view. The positive (agree) argument is easier to write.

Pros
  • Driverless cars are safer
  • Computers can design routes to facilitate travel
  • Better efficiency, do other things while driving
  • Reduces congestion
  • Reduces pollution
Cons
  • Taxi drivers will lose their jobs
  • Downsize related industries for the fewer cars and gas requirements
  • Risk due to hackers hijack car's computer
Answer 1
Many people think driverless cars will change the future world and impact society and individuals definitely. I agree with the view and believe driverless cars aren't in science fiction alone but are becoming a new way to travel.
In recent years, driverless cars have become a ­reality. Companies like Uber, Google, ...
By Royial Tim, 2021-09-10  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 250
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a clear position is presented throughout the response. Further support and development would be necessary to achieve a higher score.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a clear central topic, which is developed, and there is an effective use of cohesive devices.
Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision, although there are a few choice errors.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a wide range of structures, these are used flexibly, but a longer essay can show more grammar skills.