Many people think driverless cars will change the future world and impact society and individuals definitely. I agree with the view and believe driverless cars aren't in science fiction alone but are becoming a new way to travel.
In recent years, driverless cars have become a reality. Companies like Uber, Google, ...
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.Task Response:-All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a clear position is presented throughout the response. Further support and development would be necessary to achieve a higher score.
Coherence and Cohesion:-Each paragraph has a clear central topic, which is developed, and there is an effective use of cohesive devices.
Lexical Resources:-The lexical resource is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision, although there are a few choice errors.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:-There is a wide range of structures, these are used flexibly, but a longer essay can show more grammar skills.