Many first-year university students discover that their chosen subjects do not suit them. I believe this problem is mainly caused by parents and there are some measures helping students to choose more correct subjects.
To begin with, more and more students lose their direction of the future in middle school. They ...
Band: 6.5The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.Task Response:
-Ideas relating to each sector mentioned in the prompt are presented, but there is not much development of some.Coherence and Cohesion:
-The organization is logical, and there is a clear central topic to each paragraph.Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is limited, but just about adequate for the task, try to enhance IELTS vocabulary.
- Help LinkGrammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and although errors and some wordy occur, they rarely reduce communication.