The issue of executive pay has long been a topic of debate. Some argue that large companies should pay their CEOs and executives higher salaries than other workers. I partially agree with the view and will provide my own opinions here.
At first, the market determines executive pay. CEOs and executives have unique ...
Band: 6The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.Task Response:
-The main ideas are extended and supported; the response is ok. However, the structure has room to improve. You may divide the second paragraph into two and let the 'partially' support point 'fair wage for all' in a separate paragraph.Coherence and Cohesion:
-The organization is evident and cohesive devices are used, though rather mechanically.Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice.Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and although errors occur, they rarely reduce communication.