Increasing the minimum legal age for driving cars and motorbikes is often suggested as a means to improve road safety. I agree with the idea for several reasons, although age isn't a factor alone in road accidents.
The first is that physical and mental development is not sufficient. Some studies suggest that the ...
Band: 6.5The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.Task Response:
-The main ideas are extended and supported; the response is ok. But each paragraph should have a sentence to highlight its point.Coherence and Cohesion:
-There is a clear overall progression in the response, but somewhat mechanically, with occasional errors
- Help LinkLexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice and spelling.Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and although errors occur, they rarely reduce communication.