In many countries, most shops and products become identical. Some people think it is a positive development, while others believe it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Consumers in many countries have experienced shops and products becoming identical. Some people think it is a positive development; others dislike it and believe it's a negative development for consumers and producers. In the essay, I will present the main views of the two sides and explain why I prefer to object to ...
Band: 6.5The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.Task Response:
-You presented views from two sides by the question.The main ideas are relevant, but some are insufficiently developed. Besides, for this topic, it's easy to give an example to support your point.Coherence and Cohesion:
-Ideas are logically organized, and there is a clear progression throughout the response.Lexical Resources:
-The range of vocabulary is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision, and it shows an awareness of styles and collocation.Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-A variety of complex structures is used with some flexibility and accuracy.