Question: Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree with this view?
Answer 1
A few pupils are disobedient more or less; schools have to apply some measures to reduce negative effects. Some suggest that disruptive students have to be isolated and study...
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Answer 2
There is no doubt that some students in schools behave badly and their behaviour causes difficulty for others either because it has a negative effect on the group or because...