Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others
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Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree with this view?
Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree with this view?
Answer 1
A few pupils are disobedient more or less; schools have to apply some measures to reduce negative effects. Some suggest that disruptive students have to be isolated and study...
By Challenger Teb, 2018-01-21 View full answer
Total words: 225
Band: NA
- The essay is less than 250, doesn't match the basic criteria.
- High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 3 as start point.
- Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.
Answer 2
There is no doubt that some students in schools behave badly and their behaviour causes difficulty for others either because it has a negative effect on the group or because...
By Jiabao Lam, 2017-10-01 View full answer
Total words: 258
Band: NA
- High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Conclusion as start point.
- Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Conclusion seems too plain, try to polish it.