Television dominates the free time for too many people
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Television dominates the free time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree?
Television dominates the free time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree?
Answer 1
Today, the media plays a crucial role in everyday life. People spend more and more time on their favorite shows, soap operas, and music programs...
The media industry, with its advancement, is gaining the interest of individuals day by day. However, people today prefer spending their time relaxing in front of a TV box rather than engaging themselves in physical and cognitive tasks...
Today's generation encounters several problems due to their poor interacting abilities. Every individual today, regardless of age, holds a profound interest in TV programs, games, and social applications rather than exploring the outside world...
In conclusion, I strongly agree that progression in the media field and technology usage have profound and detrimental effects on our society...
The media industry, with its advancement, is gaining the interest of individuals day by day. However, people today prefer spending their time relaxing in front of a TV box rather than engaging themselves in physical and cognitive tasks...
Today's generation encounters several problems due to their poor interacting abilities. Every individual today, regardless of age, holds a profound interest in TV programs, games, and social applications rather than exploring the outside world...
In conclusion, I strongly agree that progression in the media field and technology usage have profound and detrimental effects on our society...
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Answer 2
Television plays a significant part in most people's lives: soap operas, sports programs, and music programs, and everyone has their favorites...
Television, in some ways, is a device that allows the viewer to relate to what is happening on the screen...
On the other hand, television has adverse effects on the body and social interaction. Doctors tell us that too much time sitting down can lead to weight gain and heart disease, and if we are sitting in front of the TV all the time, it means we are not going out to meet our friends...
As a child, my parents insisted I watch only one or two programs a night. Today, I captain my local football team and enjoy talking about the previous week's programming after a match on Saturday...
Television, in some ways, is a device that allows the viewer to relate to what is happening on the screen...
On the other hand, television has adverse effects on the body and social interaction. Doctors tell us that too much time sitting down can lead to weight gain and heart disease, and if we are sitting in front of the TV all the time, it means we are not going out to meet our friends...
As a child, my parents insisted I watch only one or two programs a night. Today, I captain my local football team and enjoy talking about the previous week's programming after a match on Saturday...
Band: 6.5
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