IELTS General Writing Task 2

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 IELTS General Writing Task 2 - Study and Practice:My Essay   
The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in most of the world cities can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in use. In order to reverse this decline in the quality of life in cities, attempts must be made to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more.

Discuss possible ways to encourage the use of public transport.

You should write at least 250 words.
The issue of the increasing levels of traffic jams and air pollution is very problematic in most of the large cities. To improve the life quality, government must encourage...
By Asset Bai, 2017-12-03  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: NA (Total words: 235)
Comment:
  • The essay is less than 250, doesn't match the basic criteria.
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has AND(9) TRANSPORT(7) PEOPLE(6); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 2 as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.
In a world of increasing environmental awareness improved public transport represents the way of the future. Although people do enjoy the convenience and privacy of traveling in...
By Hans Goredy, 2017-10-03  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: NA (Total words: 320)
Comment:
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has AND(14) PUBLIC(8) MUST(8); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 2 as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.