IELTS General Writing Task 2

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 IELTS General Writing Task 2 - Study and Practice:My Essay   
Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

You should write at least 250 words.
Some cases show that ex-convicts commit crimes again after they left prison. The reasons may be various and complicated, but by looking into them, we can find out a few measures...
By Ngan Berry, 2017-11-11  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: NA (Total words: 289)
Comment:
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Introduction as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.
It is true that some criminals commit crimes again after they have been punished. While there are several reasons for this alarming trend, some effective measures can be taken...
By Ryan Higgins, 2017-10-03  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: 8 (Total words: 272)
Comment:
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 1 as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.