The cultures of many countries around the world become more similar than they used to be

IELTS Writing Task 2 & Answer

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 IELTS General Essay Answers - #6123
Question:
The cultures of many countries around the world become more similar than they used to be. What are the reasons for this trend? Is it positive or negative?
Answer 1
The world is being evolved as a global village, and various countries' culture is becoming more similar than ever before. There are apparent reasons which stimulate this trend, and the advantages for this norm are aplenty.
Globalization is considered to be the primary cause for increasing similarity among nations. ...
By niya, 2021-04-10  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 321
Band: 8
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-This is a well-organized essay, presenting ideas on both sides, developing these ideas effectively throughout the response. All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a clear position is presented throughout the response.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a clear central topic, which is developed, and there is an effective use of cohesive devices.
Lexical Resources:
-Vocabulary is the strongest aspect of the response.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-A variety of complex structures is used with some flexibility and accuracy.
Answer 2
Culture is one's identity and paves the way for the whole family or state or country to stand apart from others - be it good or bad. Cultural differences have segregated the world for ages; however, this is widely changing in the present era as many countries have common cultural practices to behold. This essay will ...
By Magdalene, 2021-04-08  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 347
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-Ideas relating to each sector mentioned in the prompt are presented, but the essay isn't balanced, the answer to "positive or negative" is too simple.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a clear central topic, which is developed, and there is an effective use of cohesive devices.
Lexical Resources:
-There is a good range of vocabulary, and there are some less common words and phrases
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-A variety of complex structures is used with some flexibility and accuracy.
Answer 3
Striking resembles between nations with different cultures is becoming the focus of current planet citizen's concern, directly linking globalization coupled to the advancement in technology. Nevertheless, such a modern trend should be seen as a positive development both with the economic and social aspects.
Such ...
By Farid, 2021-04-24  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 311
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a clear position is presented throughout the response.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a clear central topic, which is developed, and there is an effective use of cohesive devices.
Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision, and although there are a few spelling errors; besides, should avoid old school words, like "Third World."
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There are attempts to produce complex sentence forms, but a few cause some difficulty for the reader.
Answer 4
In recent years, it has been observed that many countries are adapting to similar cultural practices than before. This essay will discuss what led to this phenomenon with suitable examples and draw a reasoned conclusion to support this change while amplifying its positive impact.
To begin with, the primary reason ...
By deep, 2021-04-07  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 284
Band: 6.5
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-Ideas relating to each sector mentioned in the prompt are presented, but there is not much development of some.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a clear central topic, which is developed, and there is an effective use of cohesive devices.
Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and although errors occur, they rarely reduce communication.
Answer 5
Cultures play a crucial role in maintaining the unity and uniqueness of the people who live in a particular area or country. But in the present world, we cannot differentiate the culture because all look similar. There are several reasons behind this trend, and this essay brings out the reasons and their impact on ...
By Sinoj Xavier, 2021-04-14  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 354
Band: 6
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-The main ideas are relevant, but some are insufficiently developed.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-The organization is evident, with some simple cohesive devices, but sometimes used inaccurately.
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Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is limited, but just about adequate for the task.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-Use complex sentences, but error levels are high in original version.
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Answer 6
It is commonly observed that people across the globe become quite similar in respect of their lifestyle. This essay will examine the main causes for this tendency and explain why it might be negative. I believe that marketing and mass media are two main reasons for it.
The popularization of particular things is a ...
By Aliya, 2021-04-24  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 252
Band: 5.5
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a position is presented that is directly relevant to the prompt; main ideas are relevant, but some would benefit from further development.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Ideas are generally arranged coherently, and there is a clear overall progression.
Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is limited, but just about adequate for the task, try to enhance IELTS vocabulary.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-In original version, the grammatical errors are frequent, such as nouns (singular, plural).
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