Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it's bad for them. Why? What are the most effective ways to improve people's eating habits?
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Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it's bad for them. Why? What are the most effective ways to improve people's eating habits?
Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it's bad for them. Why? What are the most effective ways to improve people's eating habits?
Answer Hints:
You need to answer both reasons and solutions. Pay attention to the four normal methods of changing behavior: education, punishment, reward, and technological facilities. You also need to emphasize the most effective ways to shoot a high score.
You need to answer both reasons and solutions. Pay attention to the four normal methods of changing behavior: education, punishment, reward, and technological facilities. You also need to emphasize the most effective ways to shoot a high score.
Reason
- A fast-paced life, no time to cook
- A high cost of living, hope to save money on food
- Like good taste, ignore the unhealthy factors.
Solution
- Educating people that health is more important than food taste.
- Extra taxes on unhealthy food, raise costs to downsize the market
- Apply rules to expel unhealthy food from the market.
Answer 1
Eating is one of the keys to our health. Food safety has recently become highly challenging for many of us...
To begin with, firstly, fatty foods are so delicious that we cannot resist not having them. For instance, a burger from a fast-food restaurant is prepared with loads of cheese and other flavors, making it tasty...
On the other hand, what can we do to avoid unhealthy food. Although challenging, people must change their lifestyles by eating the right food...
In conclusion, despite people getting more and more addicted to unhealthy eating practices, if proper guidelines and measures are taken to encourage healthy eating, the world will eventually become healthier in the future...
To begin with, firstly, fatty foods are so delicious that we cannot resist not having them. For instance, a burger from a fast-food restaurant is prepared with loads of cheese and other flavors, making it tasty...
On the other hand, what can we do to avoid unhealthy food. Although challenging, people must change their lifestyles by eating the right food...
In conclusion, despite people getting more and more addicted to unhealthy eating practices, if proper guidelines and measures are taken to encourage healthy eating, the world will eventually become healthier in the future...
Band: 6.5
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| All Words | 281 | 164 | 58% |
| Top 300 Words | 137 (48%) | 58 (35%) | 42% |
| 300 - 1000 Words | 54 (19%) | 35 (21%) | 64% |
| Over 1000 Words | 90 (32%) | 71 (43%) | 78% |
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Link Words: 22 (including link phrase: 1)
Sentences: Number: 16; Average Length: 107 characters; Words/Sentence: 17
Suggestions:
IELTS Essay Format:
-High-ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing; suggest rephrasing some.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
Task Response:IELTS Essay Format:
-High-ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing; suggest rephrasing some.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
-The main ideas are relevant, but some are insufficiently developed. The topic isn't just for fast food.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a precise central topic, which is developed, and cohesive devices are effectively used.
Lexical Resources:
-The range of vocabulary is quite broad and shows awareness of collocation.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms with a fair degree of accuracy.