Some people believe that universities are producing more graduates than needed, and that less emphasis should be placed on university education. Others are of a different opinion.
Discuss both views and include your own opinion.
You should write at least 250 words.
The university education is important to individuals who want to get better jobs or higher payments. Some people assert that universities are producing more graduates than...
By Dhruvei Minei, 2017-11-11
Band: NA (Total words: 284)
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As the world develops, the opportunity to achieve a tertiary education is becoming more widespread. This has led many to question whether larger numbers of university graduates...
By Ryan Higgins, 2017-10-03
Band: NA (Total words: 279)
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