IELTS General Writing Task 2

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 IELTS General Writing Task 2 - Study and Practice:My Essay   
Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together.

Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.
Since people usually think academic ability is the core of students, so it's the main benchmark, by which schools select students and sort classes. However, currently, some...
By Palilus Whuare, 2017-11-11  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: NA (Total words: 317)
Comment:
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has AND(13) STUDENTS(9) CLASSES(9); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Conclusion as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.
  • Suggest to refine coherence and cohesion by removing wordy linking words.
Some people contend that mixed ability classes are more beneficial for children’s development than streaming them on the basis of judgement about their academic abilities....
By Ryan Higgins, 2017-10-03  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: 8 (Total words: 327)
Comment:
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has STUDENTS(13) MORE(9) ABILITY(8); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 3 as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.