IELTS General Writing Task 2

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 IELTS General Writing Task 2 - Study and Practice:My Essay   
It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents.

Do you agree or disagree?

You should write at least 250 words.
For some students accommodation is a life style in college campus. Many people think that residing on campus is superior to staying at home with parents. I totally agree with...
By Meremo Oney, 2017-11-05  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: NA (Total words: 289)
Comment:
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Conclusion as start point.
  • You can improve coherence and cohesion by sharpening sentences and paragraphs with accurate linking words.
As young adults enter college, they are presented with the choice of boarding at school or living with their parents. This essay is going to argue that student accommodation is...
By Dang Tran Tung, 2017-10-03  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: 9 (Total words: 292)
Comment:
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 2 as start point.
It is a highly debatable issue whether it is more advisable if university and college students to live far away from home than to live at home with their mother and father. ...
By Jiabao Lam, 2017-10-03  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: 8 (Total words: 284)
Comment:
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Introduction as start point.
  • Suggest to refine coherence and cohesion by removing wordy linking words.
Many students are faced with the dilemma of whether to live in a university dormitory or at home with parents. From my perspective, a dormitory is evidently the better option...
By Tu Pham, 2017-10-03  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: 8 (Total words: 281)
Comment:
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has STUDENTS(10) THAT(7) ARE(6); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Introduction as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.
  • You can improve coherence and cohesion by sharpening sentences and paragraphs with accurate linking words.