Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has it improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
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Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has it improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has it improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
Answer 1
In the modern era, there are plenty of ways to cook food. It has also become easier to prepare meals regularly than in past days, impacting people's food habits...
First of all, in the past few decades, due to technological advancements, people have the latest equipment, such as ovens and microwaves, which reduces cooking time...
Apart from the benefits, there is a downside as well. Faster and new food preparation or cooking techniques made people enjoy various cuisines and quickly grow fast-food industries...
To conclude, it is undeniable that advanced technology and food preparation methods have improved the community's living standards by saving precious time and the availability of diverse cuisines...
First of all, in the past few decades, due to technological advancements, people have the latest equipment, such as ovens and microwaves, which reduces cooking time...
Apart from the benefits, there is a downside as well. Faster and new food preparation or cooking techniques made people enjoy various cuisines and quickly grow fast-food industries...
To conclude, it is undeniable that advanced technology and food preparation methods have improved the community's living standards by saving precious time and the availability of diverse cuisines...
Band: 6
Word Statistics
| Group | Word Number | Distinct | Percent |
|---|---|---|---|
| All Words | 248 | 145 | 58% |
| Top 300 Words | 106 (42%) | 44 (30%) | 41% |
| 300 - 1000 Words | 52 (20%) | 29 (20%) | 55% |
| Over 1000 Words | 90 (36%) | 72 (49%) | 80% |
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Link Words: 24 (including link phrase: 3)
Sentences: Number: 14; Average Length: 113 characters; Words/Sentence: 17
Suggestions:
IELTS Essay Format:
-The essay is less than 250, doesn't match the basic criteria.
-High-ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing; suggest rephrasing some.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
-Suggest refining coherence and cohesion by removing wordy linking words.
Task Response:IELTS Essay Format:
-The essay is less than 250, doesn't match the basic criteria.
-High-ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing; suggest rephrasing some.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
-Suggest refining coherence and cohesion by removing wordy linking words.
-The main ideas are extended and supported; the response is ok. But you should add your own experience as the question.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Ideas are generally arranged coherently, and there is a clear overall progression.
Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a good range of complex structures.
Answer 2
Most food items that were hard to prepare and restricted to experienced chefs are now readily available off the shelf or made easy to prepare with modern recipes...
Firstly, most of these foods are high in saturated fats, eventually leading to obesity. They cannot become substitutes for our staple diet and are still not so easy to prepare due to the nature of their cooking methods...
These easy-to-prepare food items are a boon to students or others who stay away from home. They are better than eating in restaurants or street food...
With the easy availability of raw ingredients, it has not become much easier to cook recipes at home that were previously possible to cherish only in high-end restaurants...
In conclusion, this is a much-welcomed and positive change and has definitely improved our lives...
Firstly, most of these foods are high in saturated fats, eventually leading to obesity. They cannot become substitutes for our staple diet and are still not so easy to prepare due to the nature of their cooking methods...
These easy-to-prepare food items are a boon to students or others who stay away from home. They are better than eating in restaurants or street food...
With the easy availability of raw ingredients, it has not become much easier to cook recipes at home that were previously possible to cherish only in high-end restaurants...
In conclusion, this is a much-welcomed and positive change and has definitely improved our lives...
Band: 6
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