Qualifications and skills are the key players that determine the development of all nations. However, there are two opinions about the curriculum of university education. A few are commending that it should emphasize academic activities that focus on theory and classroom learning, while others demanding to include ...
Band: 6The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.Task Response:
-The prompt is not fully addressed, you should present views from two sides by the question.Coherence and Cohesion:
-There is a clear overall progression in the response, but somewhat mechanically, with occasional errors
- Help LinkLexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice and spelling.Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, but there are errors in grammatical control, such as in noun plural and article.